LG: Use a variety of precise words and phrases to add info, enhance meaning and or/ add mood to a character.
SOS: Use technical language and phrases
Use a variety of descriptive language techniques
Use direct speech
Use verbs and adverbs to describe how someone is doing something or saying something
As I walked in the room my body was shaking, everyone was staring at me. A drop of sweat rolls down my face onto the floor as I sit down at the table I looked up at everyone still staring at me, blood rushing through my body as butterflies fly around rapidly through my stomach.
Hey Angela !
ReplyDeleteI loved how you used precise words and your story was very interesting to read. Next time can you please use a picture so we know who you're talking about. Thanks - Manaia <3
hi i like the way you used precise words and and your story was amazing your next step is to use morepunctuation
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