SOS: Use technical language and phrases.
Use a variety of descriptive language techniques
Use direct speech
Use verbs and adverbs to describe how someone is doing something or saying something
The Maori Chief
As I walk past the rattling bushes leaves crushed under my feet, everything was peaceful until a mysterious man jumps out. Sweat starts to roll down my face as his brown beedy eyes stare into mine. My body starts trembling he stood there right in front of me as still as a statue. His dark hair glistened in the sunlight as his grey feathery cloak danced with the wind, his hand gripping onto his wooden taiaha.
